Despite the show of hands in class not finding the discussions that worthwhile I was impressed with the number of useful paper topic suggestions, both for approach and with specific suggestions for information and for focusing the papers. You did a good job.
Rough Draft of Term Project
A number of you commented on being surprised at the grade for the rough draft stage of the paper. I have several comments that may be appropriate:
- A rough draft generally means that the entire paper has been thought through, but the wording hasn’t been polished, and some pieces of evidence haven’t been submitted.
- I’d argue that some preliminary conclusions are reasonable to expect at that stage although they could still be refined.
- Citations needn’t be complete, but at least some indication that there is a source (e.g. [xxxx]) would be desirable.
- The outline doesn’t need to have been slavishly followed. Your ideas have probably developed as you write. Nonetheless it is reasonable to expect that there’s an overall subject that the organization of the paper develops an idea, moving towards some form of conclusion.
- The issue of difficulties working with a specific piece of software arose. Most of your comments appropriately pointed out that it’s more important to write up what worked and what didn’t work, and what was learned in the process, than to persevere to absolute completion. What I care about is what you learn rather than the specific product.
- For those projecting into the future (robotics) it is reasonable to take the current state of the art and to project based on reasonable assumptions.
- Reference to other disciplines (automotive, aeronautics etc) is entirely appropriate.
- Reference to science fiction is also OK, although one would like to analyze what technologies need to be developed to make the device possible.